One hundred years in the future...
Mac sat on the lanai looking out over the rolling waves on the beach of Jamaica. She and Jon had been living in this house for the last ten years. Although, the names they were using now were James and Marti. The two of them had lived such a happy life and still had many more years ahead of them.
Sadly, she thought of her parents who had died over seventy years ago and Sandy, whom she’d lost just twenty-eight years later. Her friend had ended up married to Richie. They’d had a long and rich life. Mac had been so happy for her friends the day they’d married. She and Jon had attended each of their funerals, in disguise of course.
Jon still wrote music, although now his only audience was her and their two sons. Mac stroked her abdomen lovingly. She really hoped this child was a daughter.
She felt a pair of strong hands caress her shoulders. She hadn’t even heard his approach, but she seldom did. "Daydreaming again?" he asked.
Mac knew she’d never get tired of the sound of his voice. "Just thinking about our wonderful life," she told him.
"And it’ll only get better," he promised her. "I love you, moglie mia."
"I love you too, husband."
6 comments:
T,
I just finished your story and absolutely loved it. I'm a big fan of books/movies about vampires (and a Bon Jovi fan)....you didn't disappoint.
I never had any interest in reading fan fiction, thinking it would be weird reading 'fake' stories about 'real' people. But, my curiosity got the better of me when I saw 'the vampire' angle. I'm also glad I didn't have to wait for chapters to be added - that would've been torture. LOL
I hope you get inspired to delve into the 'Jovi Vampire World' again. Great job!!!
T - I found you through Hathor's site...this story was AMAZING. You are so very talented. Thanks for sharing!
I have just sat for the past four hours until 3:16am and this is as good as any paranormal romance i've ever read and i've read quite a few. Well done. A fantastic read. well thought out plot, good prose and a cracking dialogue between the main characters.
oh whoww, I'm impressed. I just finished reading the story. And I love it. After few chapters I wasn't aware that it is a Jon-Story. It could be some other name, I was fascinated only by the story. I hope you know what I mean.
I have been absolutely enthralled with this story since I started it a week or so ago. The only disappointment was it ending so soon. I love Jon and vampires as I mentioned earlier and you did a great job! Love Mac and Jon as a couple and the interaction with Richie.
T-
I just finished reading your story. I found the link on Hath's page. Wow. I LOVED it. At first I was kinda leary on the whole vampire angle seeing as I thought it would seem really unrealistic but you made it work wonderfully!
Hopefully you write another along the same lines sometime.
Mega job!!!
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